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Friday, April 24. 2009

note to self

Posted by rita in culture is ordinary
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::shan't spam LJ, but must make use of own blog properly and rightly ... thus::




strumpet trumpet, or 'all hail to the rain king!': an invocation

hem ... hem!

prince of the moonlight,
all hail unto thee!
though fly'st on swyfte wynges,
all hail unto thee!

oh... fish!

your queue, b.!

---

...

i loved you once, raven king.
it was in another time.
your touch.
your smell.
your skin.

i knew who you were by the lingering finger
pressing against me, through me, into me.
nobody saw you. me. us.
i still feel your touch.

the taste of your mouth
-- cliché-ladden, but, oh!, ...
i can only imagine it tasted sweet.
instead, the sour smell of cheap liquor.
if i could taste that liquor on your lips
but once.

white skin, stretched over human bones.
if i could blend into your body
just one more time.
burn into the blue light
and become one with the whiteness,
smell your hair,
taste your mouth, oh!...
rake my fingers
over that white plane.

i loved you once, rain king.
it was in another country.

---


the bardess appologizes mychely to the great godess of poetry, which is bini. i am only fit to stand in her shade and get heavily sunburnt by the radiance of her divine lines of the pen! (i enjoyed our afternoon banter immensely!!!!!)

edit: it all started with the following text being entered into a post in the LJ poetry community:

"light pools of blue
and tresses of black
no more i-love-yous
and bones and skin
the rain king ruffles his feathers

hollow laughter
on hallowed ground
i drink to you,
rain king,

and your bitterness,
mere pawn of time,
melts away

at the taste
of your skin

and bones

----
well, sabine (you urged me to join in the first place),
i was overcome with inspiration.
strike that!
see?

inspiration."
ps. you may have guessed by now the true identity of the 'strumpet trumpet'...
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Can't pretend for a minute that I got all of it, but I loved the sound of your poetry. Want moar! :-D

Coffee on thursday?

Love, Rick
#1 Rick (Link) on 2009-04-26 13:23 (Reply)
no wonder you didn't catch everything because half the time even i didn't know what i was writing about. :-D

coffee on thursday may be an option, but i can't give the thumbs up 100% yet. may have to send me an email before -- or just come by my office.
#2 rita on 2009-04-26 14:38 (Reply)

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